I like the idea, but I think there should be more optimum cleanliness in the shot as it is a heavenly body. So I would recommend smoothing the skin, removing the moles and the mottling on the legs. I would also smooth the shorts.
I would also remove the bra, as it doesn't contribute to the image or her modesty.
A few more bounce cards to clean up the guns lines would be good especially for the one camera right.
Clean up the background, there appear to be scanning artifacts to camera left and a blemish camera right.
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