Latest shoot.

[ProShotPhoto]

I seldom shoot with experienced models.

Here are jsut three from a very productive shoot

Comments and critiquesare very welcome.

[ProShotPhoto]

not a word ha ha - sadly i am bumping this

[ARTFORMS]

I will take a shot at this one this early sunday morning. Let me start out by saying your model has an attractive curvy shape with pretty face and hair.
The skin tones the first don't match the second and third images but maybe this wasn't a concern. There is some jpg compression artifacts showing on the first and third images that keep them from looking as good as they could.
The apartment building or what ever that is outside the window on the second image isn't very attractive as a background. Your copyright logo gets cut off at the bottom of the second two images. Overall the third image is my favorite due to the warm skin tones and setting in the room.

[Rasputin]

Very nice set. I would crop out the outlet behind the knee in the third photo.

[Al_Nowak]

Originally Posted by Rasputin

Very nice set. I would crop out the outlet behind the knee in the third photo.

I do think he means "clone out" rather than "crop out" though.

On the first shot, I'd really be tempted to clone out the shower nozzle, water control handle (What the heck do you call that thing?), and whatever that is in front of her face (door hinge maybe?) in the mirror. They keep pulling my eye over to that part of the image.

On my deleted comments... Hey, I've only had one small cup of coffee today, and I keep mis-reading the join date as the posted date.