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[timdog79]

I know this is a lot of pictures in one post but I had a hard time narrowing it down to just these. Please let me know what you think. All C&C are welcomed. Also, no retouching has been done as of yet.

[Al_Nowak]

I'd rethink the last one...even with some touchup, it just doesn't seem like it's gonna work... IMHO.

[Mark_Oehler]

I think six is my favorite. I like the way she is falling out of the frame.

[timdog79]

Honest opinions are all I ask fo.

[R_Fredrick_Smith]

I think they most all have some problems. There are so many, that it is hard to say very much about them as I found myself getting lost trying to scroll back and forth and know which photo I was talking about. I think the copyright notice is overkill and distracting. It doesn't add to the photos, it distracts from the photos. The lighting generally works pretty well and you have some interesting ideas, but in most cases little details got in the way. Here is an annotated screen shot of your photos to give little notes on each. But you might want to just post process one and post it (your favorite) and then we can give more details. #1 and #6 have the most potential.

Cheers,
rfs

[BenE]

In additon to what has been said... Zoom in.. and step back.

[PITON]

Wow this is great comments, it's gonna help a lot of people (me for sure!) thanks

[jimmyd]

Personally, I like #2 the best even though I think you're a bit off with the composition-- I think you cropped a bit too much of her out. Her pose and expression work very nicely for off-beat cropping but perhaps a bit more of her in the image with a nod to the Rule of Thirds would work?

[timdog79]

Thank you . I really appreciate all the help.

[Dman65]

I like #6 the most myself. I am sure it could be improved a bit, but I like that she is not dead center in the frame and that helps create a bit of interest. I would probably also clean up under her eyes a bit.