new... from Italy

[tom65]

a shooting in a Store..
I hope you write me soon....
FIlippo from Florence

[tom65]

............. anythinig to write me???????????????????????????????????????????

[JimHob]

Filippo,

I think there are a couple of issues with the photo. her backside is a little hot but that could be this LCD i'm viewing the image on but the major thing to me is that the dark shadow on the face is to much or not enough. I like the composition. I also wonder if a DOF where the background was blurred would be better.

[lsc1]

Firenze, bellisimo! I like the location and setup but the shadow on the left side of her face is not flattering. Any more from this shoot?

[BobEdens]

her backside is a little hot

I think thats why he's taking photos of her... [grin]

I noticed light from two different directions, its distracting to me but it may be caused by that shadow on her face..

I agree with lsc1, any more to share from this set??

[tom65]

Yes.. thanks a lot..

I've something else....

as soon as possible ... sorry!!!