My first critiques post...... please!!!!

[tom65]

This is my first.. post........... in this site...
I hope you write me how do you think about ...

[Erbin]

I photograph high school seniors, families and weddings...so with that in mind I give my opinion.

Unusual perspective...Right hand placement on the bed might look better than the back of its partially closed position on her thigh...eye contact with the lens might add to the mystique of this type of image capture.