Brittany

[ARTFORMS]

From this past weekend with Brittany. Shot at f/2.5 with available light.



Jim

[kgphoto]

A nice exposure and attractive girl. Who did the wardrobe consultation on this shot? Were you going for an eclectic mix? What do the various elements in the picture mean? What are they trying to say? What was your color harmony thinking?

On a posing level, have her sit up straight and pull her shoulders back, even if she is crossing her arms over her chest. this will help the rolls of fat on her tummy and improve her shoulder/collar bone line.

Right shoulder is a little too hot. Either scrim or PS next time.

Wait a minute! I see that you didn't ask for comments, I may have overstepped here. If so, let me know and I will remove.

[R_Fredrick_Smith]

Originally Posted by kgphoto

Wait a minute! I see that you didn't ask for comments, I may have overstepped here. If so, let me know and I will remove.

Actually he did ask for comments. Afterall the photo is posted in the

"Photo Reviews & Critiques Only Constructive & professional critiques only"

forum.

Cheers,
rfs

[seanmclennan]

I like it.

Is that anti-persperant on her left breast?

sean

[kgphoto]

Sorry RFS. Sometimes I can't see the forest for the trees.

[ARTFORMS]

Originally Posted by kgphoto

A nice exposure and attractive girl. Who did the wardrobe consultation on this shot? Were you going for an eclectic mix? What do the various elements in the picture mean? What are they trying to say? What was your color harmony thinking?

On a posing level, have her sit up straight and pull her shoulders back, even if she is crossing her arms over her chest. this will help the rolls of fat on her tummy and improve her shoulder/collar bone line.

Right shoulder is a little too hot. Either scrim or PS next time.

Wait a minute! I see that you didn't ask for comments, I may have overstepped here. If so, let me know and I will remove.

Yes I did post this in the critique section so your comments are welcome.
We didn't really have a planned out color scheme for the shoot, it was more of a laid back day to shoot some casual images. The brown straps showing are from her swimsuit top under the tank top. Was also going for the natural look of shadows from the tree leaves rather than scrim this particular image for a flat lighting situation. A few of the other pictures a scrim was used to eliminate harsh shadows on her face.

[ARTFORMS]

Originally Posted by seanmclennan

I like it.

Is that anti-persperant on her left breast?

sean

I believe you are right about that and it has since been corrected.
Anti persperant on her tank top. She noticed it and made the same
comment after it was sent to her.

[kgphoto]

Nice fix.

What happened to the original image in the first post?

[ARTFORMS]

Originally Posted by kgphoto

Nice fix.

What happened to the original image in the first post?

It still shows up when I look at it here. Not certain why it wouldn't be on here for you to see.

[Stecyk]

Originally Posted by ARTFORMS

It still shows up when I look at it here. Not certain why it wouldn't be on here for you to see.

I saw your first image originally. But now I don't see it when I use Firefox 2.0.0.3. However, it is still visible using IE 7. I don't have an explanation, but thought I'd mention that the OP is likely experiencing a difficulty.