Will this get some C&C??

[Actionlens]

[RSStory]

Image 2 if the crop were changed would be a really good shot in my opinion. If you crop it just above the elbow it looks great. With the current crop you need more space above her head and frankly I think there is no value in anything below her right elbow in this shot.

#1 I am not sure what would make it better but I am sure that it doesnt work for me in its current form.

Scott

[Actionlens]

Originally Posted by RSStory

Image 2 if the crop were changed would be a really good shot in my opinion. If you crop it just above the elbow it looks great. With the current crop you need more space above her head and frankly I think there is no value in anything below her right elbow in this shot.
#1 I am not sure what would make it better but I am sure that it doesnt work for me in its current form.
Scott

tHanks for an opinion Scott. On No 1 is is composition or post processing?

[RSStory]

Originally Posted by Actionlens

tHanks for an opinion Scott. On No 1 is is composition or post processing?

I think it is both. The body leads me right out of the image. and I am not a big fan of artificial DOF

[Actionlens]

Originally Posted by RSStory

I think it is both. The body leads me right out of the image. and I am not a big fan of artificial DOF

Thanks. Just to add there was no artificial DOF - shot at f1.8 with 85mm on my 1D MII.

Regards
Chris