Want to tell me I suck? This is your chance!

[kentalan]

Here is your chance to tell me how much I suck and that Jacki is the only redeeming feature to this image. So far, this was the best shoot that I've had, but please point out my mistakes, flaws, errors, and head-up-ass maneuvers so that I don't do them again. Be blunt and honest--you won't offend me or hurt my feelings.

Here is the image that was done with a Nikon D100, AF Nikkor 85mm f/1.8D, and an Alien Bee B800 with a white umbrella. The settings were f/1.8 at 1/125 of a second, and according to the light meter 60% of the lighting was result of the B800 positioned about 4 feet in front of Jacki. The remain 40% was a ball of plasma positioned at the center of the solar system and behind Jacki, diffused with white venetian blinds. There was a guitar in the image, but it has almost entirely been cropped out

Only thing I see...is the guitar tuning knobs..seem to be growing out of her arm.
is it just me? I had to really look to figure out where the guitar was coming from
my story and Im stickin to it!
Don.

[kentalan]

Yep, I see how the guitar is growing out of her arm now. There's something else that I think Gomez or Grant would pick up on instantly though if they saw this.

[Hailey]

other than what don pointed out, i think its an awesome image with an awesome model.. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img]

[Tom_B]

GEEZ...and I thought those g-keys were large buttons on the blouse! I got too much to learn here! Looks great to me Alan, fine shot of a fine model!