Kinga from Spectrum Studios

[Sean_Michaels]

Taken with available light.

[vsrdan]

Great! I would crop it to avoid structures on the left a little bit (at least the dark line coming down from top left corner).

[cindavphoto]

I have a difference of opinion. I like the way she's framed in the shadows. I like the shot just the way it is. But who am I to say, I've never attempted to shoot anything quite like this.

Cinnamon

[PaoloM]

Great picture, but i think will be better with the whole body trought the light

Paolo

[rdavis]

I like the picture. I kind of agree the pipes on the left are distracting. And I feel you could have used a little fill.

Did you happen to take one closer? Where it was just the model, and the light slashing across the wall?

[Sean_Michaels]

No, I don't think I took one closer. But I did take this one.

[grsphoto]

I think cropping out the window and the wall to the left would help what is looking like a good image.

Glenn

[Sean_Michaels]

I came across this image. It seems to be close to the cropping everyone is suggesting.

[Wade]

Hey Sean, I love both versions. Great use of negative space. I tend to like the first one better because the radiator, pipes and window frame give a real sense of place, better than the last one. Good work on both.

[Sean_Michaels]

Thanks!! I agree with you but everybody else seems to think the pipes are too distracting. Oh well, to each his own.