Two More of Paula 2nd shoot

[creativeproductions2004]

2more critique away!!!!!! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

[jtsmith]

Black Skirt with the black background makes it look like a magic trick....Part of her floats.

The tank top is kind of loud and busy. I am not a fan of patterns in simple model photography.

Arms crossed like this is a man's pose. If you are going to do the traditional arms crossed pose, then have her place her hands so we can see them in a bent wrist, fingers elegantly placed up the arm....

[creativeproductions2004]

Thanks for takin the time JT Ru Tslking kinda like this or this? or no



ron
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[jtsmith]

In the first one the pink works against the black. Another hint is to take a clothes pin and pin back the lose shirt in the back.

The second the shirt is a solid color and that is more suttle to the eye so it's not distracting with a pattern.

J T

[creativeproductions2004]

Thanks Jt for explaining [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]


Ron

[jtsmith]

You hate me know don't ya? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

[creativeproductions2004]

Actually No i don't ..Sorry
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