New Lingerie session

[Diesel]

I wanted to go with some of the suggestion that I got from some of my other post and try to make the mood fit the lingerie this time. Let me know if this image works or not. Thank you in advance.

[Bobby_G]

This advice was given to me in one of my posts with the model posing in a similar fashion. Be careful of her placing the weight of her head on her hands, its causing pressure on her neck and that protrusion is unsightly. I personally would like more lighting especially near the face...possibly a reflector or foamcore to highlight the face. I also think the hand holding up her head would be better served under the hair as opposed to ON the hair...kinda breaks it up for me. And lastly, her positioning and weight placement seems to have pushed the bottom of her left ribs out just a bit...

I think she is very attractive and I love her figure. I think this "pose" has great possibilities and you have one heck of a model to work with.

[Diesel]

I don't agree about needing more light on her in this photo. The image would turn flat and not capture the mood I was wanting. As for the rib, that is just her shape, it's there when she is standing too. I did have a few photos with her hand under her hair, but they didn't turn out and called too much attention to the ear.
I can see the muscle in the neck and will watch in the future, but anytime you have a model with low body fat you are going to see these muscles more. Thank you for the compliments and your thoughts, much appreciated.

[Paul_Ferrara]

Pretty good lighting but a few nits.... She's going uphill slightly. Next time bring her head back toward you a bit. You cut off part of her eye with the bridge of her nose. And I'd have brought her right hand up a bit so her fingers weren't chopped off.

Paul

[dynamike]

Nice lighting. I think it gives you the effect you were going for. I would like this image a little more if she were to look more at the camera as to show white on both sides of her eyes. This will also help her neck some. If she were to move her hadn more to the top of her head then that will further help her neck.

Mike

[cindavphoto]

I agree, I think if her head were turned more toward you it would bring out her eyes more and soften that muscle in her neck. Also if her hand was a bit higher (toward the crown of her head more) it would have brought her head down a bit and looked more natural, once again, softening that muscle. I do like the lighting. Cropping is good, except for the fingers. Maybe if she had her hand falling over her stomach. (Nah, after looking at it again, forget the hand over her stomach, she had two great of a tummy to cover.) Just some ideas.

Cinnamon

[Diesel]

Thanks for the suggestions Mike, I agree with your points.

[Diesel]

I will watch the neck muscles next time, thanks for the help.

[Diesel]

Thanks for the ideas Paul.