Stefani #1

[gawie]

Greetings from the other end of the world! This beauty is only 15 years old.
Your comments please.

Stefani #1 

[DaveB]

It's a boring, stagnant photo. Tell me...does it look boring to you? Be honest. It's just a shot! Does she looked bored too?

Remember to make sure something is reflecting in her eyes to give them catch lights and life.

Her shoulder looks huge because it just blends into the background.

I would have tilted her head towards her left shoulder to break up the stagnant nature, turn her nose to the right a bit, and get a better than "ho hum" expression from her.

[nakins]

well, I would agree about the pose and expression on her face, and the background issue. But, I think you kinda hammered him with your choice and that model. I mean, did you have to pull out a hot, sexy, barely clad, finely featured, 20 something? Don't you have any 15 yo model shots you could have used to compare with? Come on man, that's like me showing you my well kept 96 z28 and you pull out a 63 split window. It's just not fair.

[gawie]

Thanks Dave, I appreciate it!
Gawie

[kombizz]

beautiful image, nice composition & good lighting