A shot and crop of Kellie.

[MrPhotoStudios]

I like the fist one that is cropped.

[Paul Johnson]

I agree with Dave's assessment, the work and comments stand on there own. Keep in mind when you critique a photo you are not pointing a finger at the photog only giving an honest opinion. This doesn't make it right only one individuals opinion. My personal opinion is that it appears you have a nice model and probably could have done better on the shot.

[Bobby_G]

I am not a fan of either one. I just don't think the high ISO exposure along with the underexposed face works for this image. I myself try new shots like this all of the time...and have even posted a few that the majority didn't like...BUT I made darn certain the crowd knew what my intentions were LOL