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not that you asked for C&C but i'm gonna give you some anyway cuz that's how i am.
it's an interesting image that, at least in my opinion, could have been improved with the use of some white foamcore or beadboard and a flag.
her right arm and right torso are, for my tastes, too deep in shadow. a bit of reflective fill, and i mean just a tiny bit, would bring out some subtle detail in those shadows.
the inside of her left thigh and her left forearm could have been flagged to reduce the exposure in those areas and the resulting distractiveness.
the pose is cool altho i think if she stretched her right leg and left arm out a bit more, the left tattooed star would be fully revealed yet it would keep her breasts hidden. (which, i'm guessing, was your intent to do.) it's a very fashion-like pose, albeit without clothes.
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I'm not an art critic but I think I know a good picture when I see one.
Since everyone here knows that I happen to love those deep shadows, I'm going to have to disagree with the great jimmyd. There's just enough light to see that there is a hand at the end of that arm.
You have used the triangle composition rules to your advantage but you forgot about the "bottom of the foot/shoe to the camera" rule.
Nice work Don. I'm looking forward to our next meeting.
Rick D.
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We better start being nice to this guy or he'll be giving us lessons soon.
Rick D.
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