The latest... - Glamour 1™ Putting the Glamour Back in Photography!

missinglink786 · 12-04-2006, 09:17 PM

Messed around with a few things last night... what do you guys think? The model is my friend Heather.

*EDIT I went back and tried to make the images a little less flat... are these any better?

**jford** · 12-04-2006, 09:58 PM

I think the first has the most potential, but needs an area in focus - like her shoes. (Or, alternately, and equally probable, my eyes are just totally out of wack.) All seem a bit flat for my taste. Congrats on trying some creative work, though. Good idea, IMO - but needs more work.

**DaveB** · 12-04-2006, 10:20 PM

They're just a bit too flat for my taste for B&W. There really is no crisp "punch" to those. No range of gray tones.

missinglink786 · 12-04-2006, 10:23 PM

well dave, hopefully you'll fix that when I'm at your workshop saturday!

**DaveB** · 12-04-2006, 10:26 PM

It's in the processing of the image and working with the tones and curves. All I'm providing Saturday is cookies and milk.

**DaveB** · 12-04-2006, 11:53 PM

Much better!!

missinglink786 · 12-05-2006, 12:03 AM

Thanks Dave.

**jford** · 12-05-2006, 08:47 AM

I agree - the revised images are better. Still think the first (now last) is the best, but it still needs a sharply focussed area. Much better, though.