Danelle #1 S.Africa.

[gawie]

After all the help I have received, I hope this is better. Please comment.

[DaveB]

You tell me; does this inspire you? What does her expression tell you? What is she feeling? What is she doing there? Why is she there, and why is she in a bikini?

These are all questions I ask myself when looking at this image. To me, she is just "there."

Thank god she's not against a tree though, so I give you that! LOL

You're improving. Keep it up!

[DaveB]

Let me add some food for thought.

If I am typically going to shoot a bikini image, I want a bikini "setting."

I wouldn't shoot a bikini in a bedroom, nor would I shoot lingerie by the pool (ok..maybe in the pool...LOL)

Try to match the wardrobe with the setting.

[timmerjean]

Very noticeable improvement. Dave has some good points. I'd like to add that the lightng is getting better and having the model look into the camera adds a big diff to previous posts. Can't wait to see your next post.

[gawie]

Comments taken, will do so..............thanks!