Cancun - part 2

[Bigtimebeginner]

hey all, thanks for the comments before. Processed a couple more.



Seems a little soft but I have to admit that I like this pose...



and I can't remember if i posted this one or not so here it goes...


After reviewing a lot of the shots, i like the direction that our photography is going. I do notice, obvious with these three shots though, that I need to do a better job with facial expressions (although I like these, they are all the same). Any recommendations would be appreciated... And, any critiques are welcome as well!

[CatCynic]

I have to agree about the facial expressions. You might even want to read Mr Gomez's book for his comments about expressions (do I get bonus points for referencing the book? ).

In the second shot you have reflections off the water on her abdomen - looks fairly unattractive. You could have avoided this by having her lean back a little instead of forward.

In the first two shots, at least on my monitor, it looks like you have blown the highlights on the left cup of the bikini top - the colour looks flat.

The first two shots do show, however, excellent control of depth of field.

(sadly, I have nothing appropriate to post, so I must defy rule 10)