My first photo shoot

[ar2966]

Hello everyone,my name is Arsen.This is my first model shoot and using photoshop.Any comments are welcome.Thanks.

[photoshooter]

No comments, just a question, why such a small image?

[ar2966]

Thanks for replying.It's my first time posting,wasn't sure how to show a larger image.Try it now.Thanks.

[rixafter6]

A few things:

1. Get familiar with the clone tool and blending tool to get rid of distracting spots on the model and the rest of the image.

2. Get a little closer to your model so we don't see that you've just thrown a cover over your sofa.

3. Be careful of tight fitting clothes that depress the skin

4. Be midful of hands that appear out of the top of your models head.

5. Read this critique and remember the written word sounds harsher than the spoken one.

Rick D.

[Jigo]

I think the pic would be more interesting if you lit the brick wall behind the subject also.