O.K.Same Photo .....just not B&W...

[LillyR]

Thank you all for the Feedback on my B lack and White version of this one...Let me know how you like it now...

[jford]

Much improved, Ms. R. However, notice the tonal difference of your face compared to your body. Was it exertion, the sun, or is your foundation perhaps too pink? No one is one tone all over, but here the contrasts are pretty noticable.

I'd say you were quite bold to risk climbing among those rocks without protection. No scrapes or bruises? The modeling portion of this image is done quite well. You're very lovely and willing to work hard.

Best wishes and good luck.

[Al_Nowak]

As previously mentioned, your face is a tad pink. If you have the software to do more ambitious editing, that can be easily fixed.

But the overall composition now is really about you and not some big rocks...

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[Jagdoc]

Although I really like B &amp; W, the cropping you did makes this picture much better. Now it's all about you.
Very nice.

[seekerofbeauty]

I think it's a good shot, but as mentioned, your face is too pink. It's not really your fault. All the girls wear that makeup these days and have for quite a while. I'm not sure why, but pink seems to be the order of the day ... still. Maybe for everyday, it's fine, but for shooting you might buy some more "tan" toned shades. they would blend better with body tones and look better in sunlight. YOU look great ... when one looks past the makeup and the climbing thing (if that's what you actually did) is a mark in your favor. Keep up the good work and ... Please ... share some more. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]



No makeup ... but she's only 10, sooo ...