Lindsay - Glamour 1™ Putting the Glamour Back in Photography!

**RSStory** · 09-13-2005, 09:41 PM

Here are a couple more of my shoot with Lindsay today. I just grabbed a couple and did some quick edits and here they are. Comments and critiques are welcome and appreciated.

Scott

**BhamPhoto** · 09-13-2005, 10:28 PM

Scott,
These are great. The second is my favorite. In the first image I can't stop looking at her left leg it seems to be getting some odd wrap a round lighting maybe bounced off of the background. I'd love to see a larger image of the second one.

Take care,
Jim

**RSStory** · 09-13-2005, 10:36 PM

I dont think that odd spot is wrap around lighting... I tried to fix a small flaw that I missed in the shot and I screwed it up in post. I am gonna have to re-work that one a bit I think. Thanks for the comments and the compliment on the second one.

Scott

09-13-2005, 10:45 PM

Hey Scott..... I like the second shot the best. The first one is a great idea but it's not believable, not that it has to be, but I feel it falls short of your abilities.

The second shot I like quite a bit. I see things that would make it different but not neccessarily better other than a few cosmetic things like the string/strap between her left elbow and the dress. One other thing I would suggest is to post larger images so that more detail can be seen and a more accurate critique can be offered. I like to post around 600x900 pixels.

**RSStory** · 09-14-2005, 07:47 AM

dam dam dam... I didnt even see that strap you mentioned. dam. Thanks Marc. I have got pay more attention to that stuff.

As for the size. I always read here that we should post 600 on the long side so people dont have to scroll to see the images on those 15 inch monitors. (sorry dude I had to say that) and I have been doing them 500 on the long side as I am on dialup now that I have moved back to the country. I am willing to post larger if that is better I just dont want people to get mad about it.

Scott

**Shadow** · 09-14-2005, 09:14 AM

Scott, I like the second one best also. Only problem that I saw, was the models left hand pulling up on the skirt. My very first impression was that her panties had gotten into a wad, and she was reaching up to fix that. Perhaps her hand outside the skirt, and sliding it up her leg.

Guess we all see things differently.

Good stuff, and the gun shot with smoke is a great idea.

Thanks for sharing

Shadow/ Scott A

09-14-2005, 09:32 AM

I like to view an image just as if I was holding an 8x10 or so in my hand and not a 4x6 snapshot. I too am on a dialup now and if I save my images at 600x900 and a 6 in Photoshop, I end up with an image around 75k to 120k.

**stevenD** · 09-14-2005, 09:37 AM

lol, I did a few gun shots also the other day. I can't post one as I am at work.

But I am not sure if the smoke works, I mean, shouldn't it be from the end of the gun? not near her body....

**RSStory** · 09-14-2005, 09:59 AM

ok...this is almost physically painful to do but I have to agree that I like to see a larger image when I critique so here it is. not saying that this shot is anything special just happend to be the one I was working on at the time so here it is.

telcoman · 09-14-2005, 10:18 AM

I really like #2. On number one something looks weird the way her left leg tapers off at the bottom of the image. Also, I'd liked it a lot more if the smoke was limited to just a little coming form the end of the barrel.

I know some people don't like the gun pictures but in the west, guns are a birthright. I like 'em.

Very pretty model.

David