Hey, Ben... welcome to GG!
Love that first image - a Jill Hennesey look-alike, eh? Might have improved it by having her eyes open and looking at the camera. #3, ya nailed the eyes, but where'd those hands come from? Looks like they appear out of nowhere. #4 gorgeous eyes... interesting perspective.. the only thing I could suggest is to remember the rule of thirds, and try to set it up so that her eyes were at one of the intersections of thirds of the picture (i.e. move her eyes up and to the left just a bit - that would have given you a bit more of the body to work into the image).
On the last image, sure wish those shadows weren't there on her face. Might have thrown some light into the shade with a reflector or fill flash.
Quite a good start to your GG experience, Ben!
Here's one of our holiday houseguest...
Wayne
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