I want to congratulate you on your accomplishment. Nothing better than being proud of yourself and stepping out of your comfort zone.
I would start looking at the lighting in the near future, and remember the word "separation."
See how her black top get's lost in the shadow on the wall? Makes her look wider than she is. The eyes are also dark, almost to the point that all you see are her eye whites.
All of this will come in time, and you're well on your way to at least realizing some of the best ASSets to capture.
Keep it comin!!
