not that you asked for C&C but i'm gonna give you some anyway cuz that's how i am.
it's an interesting image that, at least in my opinion, could have been improved with the use of some white foamcore or beadboard and a flag.
her right arm and right torso are, for my tastes, too deep in shadow. a bit of reflective fill, and i mean just a tiny bit, would bring out some subtle detail in those shadows.
the inside of her left thigh and her left forearm could have been flagged to reduce the exposure in those areas and the resulting distractiveness.
the pose is cool altho i think if she stretched her right leg and left arm out a bit more, the left tattooed star would be fully revealed yet it would keep her breasts hidden. (which, i'm guessing, was your intent to do.) it's a very fashion-like pose, albeit without clothes.
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