Couple of quickie things that come to mind for me, since you asked:
Photo #1: leaf coming out of the top of her head is distracting, cut-off skirt is out-dated
Photo #2: nice image
Photo #3: the eyes are too dark. lack of catchlights creates very cold lifeless eyes
Photo #4: hair going right into her mouth is a huge distraction to me
Photo #5: the left side of her looks huge due to the wardrobe and how the pose makes it "balloon"
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