Hey Scott..... I like the second shot the best. The first one is a great idea but it's not believable, not that it has to be, but I feel it falls short of your abilities.
The second shot I like quite a bit. I see things that would make it different but not neccessarily better other than a few cosmetic things like the string/strap between her left elbow and the dress. One other thing I would suggest is to post larger images so that more detail can be seen and a more accurate critique can be offered. I like to post around 600x900 pixels.
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